The Fifteenth of June – a Book Review

The Fifteenth of JuneTitle: The Fifteenth of June by Brent Jones

Genre: Currently #721 in Best Seller’s Rank for Kindle eBooks, Literature & Fiction, Literary Fiction, Sagas

Publisher: Amazon Digital Services, LLC

Publication Date:  February 2017

The Fifteenth of June Eye-catching cover (The bench holds significance.)

What is it that makes us step outside our comfort zone to sample a graphic scene filled plot we wouldn’t usually consider? Perhaps it is the chance to be an anonymous, albeit disapproving voyeur in a train wreck.

Such is the case when I read emotionally charged The Fifteenth of June by Brent Jones. His protagonist, Drew Thomson, is a deeply flawed 28-year-old alcoholic who realizes after five years living with Heather that he really doesn’t love her. Drew moves from her apartment with no job, no digs of his own, and no prospects. His contacts are from previous employment where he was fairly successful but crushingly unhappy, and his antisocial behavior seems exacerbated by the lack of any sense of direction. There is no future. There is only the past and it was dark. Continue reading “The Fifteenth of June – a Book Review”

Traveller – Inceptio – a Book Review

Traveller-Inceptio by Rob ShacklefordTitle: Traveller – Inceptio by Rob Shackleford

Publisher: BookBaby

Publication Date:  February 2017

Traveller – Inceptio – The cover depicts a “pattern welded sword,” called a Saex, created by Owen Bush, Swordsmith of Kent, England

How long has it been since you were able to get into a really good book and find a long-term companion?

Traveller-Inceptio pulls you in from the first page as you realize this man, Michael, does not belong here–not really. But he is not your ordinary traveler, nor an ordinary man finding himself in extraordinary circumstances. After momentary disorientation, he becomes alert to his surroundings. He is intelligent and well trained–but where is he exactly?

The forest is pristine, almost magical, and ethereal even to the point where he might imagine fairy folk, playing quietly in the warming sun, until the wolf makes itself known. Continue reading “Traveller – Inceptio – a Book Review”

Exploration of Sunken (Treasure) Ships

the MargueriteWhat is it that attracts us to sunken ships? Whether treasure ships or WW2, the fascination seems endless and demands a search. If found; explored.

What happened to the ship and it’s crew? Was it a battle? Was it a hurricane like the one in which the Marguerite went down?

Sole-SurvivorMy grandfather, son of the captain, was first officer abroad the Marguerite about to cross the equator “some ten of fifteen miles west of Lagos,”  (aka the gold, ivory, and slave coast) on a starboard tack when a typhoon struck the ship and she down, stern first. My grandfather always classified the Marguerite as carrying general cargo. No treasure there–we think! Continue reading “Exploration of Sunken (Treasure) Ships”

MS Word Spelling and Grammar Checker, Grammarly–or Both?

Grammar NaziLate to the party again? Sometimes I never get there at all! It’s not as if I haven’t heard of Grammarly before, just that I’ve been quite content to finish my thoughts and then run the Spelling and Grammar checker under “Tools” in my very old MS Word (2003) program. But there are advantages and disadvantages to the simple Spelling and Grammar checker on my equally old (POS) computer. I wonder if the newer word (2007, 2010) .doc and .docx have a more complete command of the language? Currently, I must “add to dictionary” constantly slang terms, colloquialisms, and common blogging expressions, as well as the idioms commonly used for sailing or popular historic word usage (from my grandfather’s manuscripts). So, I thought I’d look into the fuss over Grammarly.

MS Word Spelling and Grammar Checker

Spelling-Grammar checkPart of the reason I continue to stick with MS Word Spelling and Grammar checker is that it also gives me Readability Stats, including passive voice phrases (8%–that’s acceptable at under 10%). This is the Flesch Reading Ease score for this document (55.5%–I’d prefer to see 70%) as well as the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level score (at 8.9 or freshman in high school–should be easy to read–I’m good with that), about which I’ve previously written and I try to keep my posts within a certain level.

Paper Checker

There are a number of free, but limited, independent spell and grammar checkers out there available for download. One is Paper Checker. It is easy as copy/paste. And while it invites you to paste the text of your paper (or upload a file), I didn’t see any word limit. The Terms of Service, which you must agree to, were last updated February 20, 2014. After pasting (or uploading) your text, just select “Get Report” and you’ll immediately receive your analysis. This is not a program I’ve personally used and I’d assume is limited. (That is, don’t expect to upload a novella size text for analyzation. OOPS! Word doesn’t recognize that word [analyzation] either).

Grammarly

I signed up for the Grammarly Extension yesterday, intending to use it for this post, but almost before fully “signed in,” asked to upgrade to “professional.” I’m not sure about you, but I get really ticked when immediately asked to upgrade before I’ve had a chance to use or understand the program. The free version is available to download for your browser on Chrome, Safari, and Firefox and is compatible with Word and Outlook. Is the “FREE” version that cheesy? Well, let’s see:

Grammarly Pros:
  • The naysayers insist it is not that great at telling you if you have the correct word.
    1. Free Grammarly for Word currently uses 100 grammar rules to apply to your document.
    2. Punctuation correction.
    3. Will work with WordPress(?) as well as Facebook. (I have yet to prove this.)
    4. Grammarly can scan a document and highlight those words (thesaurus) that could be replaced to strengthen the text. (Upgrade to premium)
    5. Grammarly now corrects out of order pronouns; i.e., Her children and sheShe and her children…
    6. Word spelled correctly but used in the wrong context is caught. Examples: lose/loose, affect/effect, lie/lay, there/their/they’re
    7. The biggee according to Bill Winterberg, Journalist out of Atlanta…The service goes beyond the basic spell check and grammar check built into the word processor, as Grammarly can identify correctly spelled words that are used in the wrong context. (According to the Grammarly website.) (Is this, or not, another upgrade to premium?)

 

spell checkAnd that alone will separate the men from the boys… or writers from blogger/hobbyists. (“Major” improvements have been added over the past year, according to my new email.)

Mercy! So, are there any cons? Yes…but these may not all be cons–just more incentives to upgrade:

Grammarly Cons:
  1. If you are busy writing in real time, you may lose your train of thought if you are constantly interrupted. I normally complete my text and then test. I have enough interruptions without contending with my program constantly second-guessing me.
  2. You don’t get off that easy–you’ll still need a command of the English language and grammar rules so you can decide when to accept the suggestions made by your software. I routinely use contractions; Word Spelling and Grammar catches those and apparently must be ignored every article.
  3. You must be online and connected to use the software. (Another reason I like to work in MS Word and test when I’m ready.)
  4. Blog writers, students, journalists, and others may edit content according to their profession. (For free, I was given a choice of student, professional, or other.)
  5. A writer may select their specific genre to receive the best analysis. (Upgrade to premium.)
  6. Text can be analyzed to provide results that separate writing from casual, academic, technical, or business. (Upgrade to premium. The first upgrade is $8.75/month when billed annually.)
  7. The plagiarism notification is available after upgrading to premium.
  8. Premium Grammarly currently uses 250 grammar rules to apply to your document and ensures text incorporates the standard for writing based on the pre-selected genre.

Conclusion

This is a test. This is only a test! If you use Grammarly for Word and are totally sold, see something here I missed, see something here I’ve incorrectly interpreted, please let me know. I’m just getting started on yet another piece of software I’ve been made aware of and never used. First, I’ll run this through my usual–MS Word Spelling and Grammar. Then I’ll paste in Grammarly.

NOTE: I tried uploading in both options:

  • Paste
  • Upload

The paste checker came back with two (2) “critical” issues, 14 advanced issues, which are only accessible through an upgrade to premium.

Upload was done twice. The first came back with 5 critical issues, the second with 6, both suggested 24 advanced issues. (Items suggested were adding “the” in front of upgrade…)

(A) Although it says formatting will be saved with upload–was not. (Formatting was saved with copy/paste.)

(B) Ignoring a suggestion results in an “undo” arrow.

(C) Oxford commas are suggested.

Unless I upgrade to premium, I don’t see a real advantage for me over the current MS Word Spelling and Grammar checker. For some great, additional and current details, however, including comparison of free and premium, see here, and let me know what kind of spell and grammar checker you prefer.  Is it Grammarly? ©2017 Virginia Williams – Photo attribution: 123RF I Love Likes and Comments--Please Share!

How Existentialism Almost Killed Me: Kierkegaard Was Right – a Book Review

How Existentialism Almost Killed MeTitle: How Existentialism Almost Killed Me: Kierkegaard Was Right (The Max Brown Tetralogy) (Volume 4)

Publisher: Hough Publishing LLC

Publication Date:  August 2016

How Existentialism Almost Killed Me: Kierkegaard Was Right–Trust Me–The Elephant Makes Sense

How well do we really know our “soul mates?” Apparently, not all that well as we find Max Brown continually surprised by his wife Sally in the deadly assignment that sends them into a succession of lethal confrontations. Continue reading “How Existentialism Almost Killed Me: Kierkegaard Was Right – a Book Review”

The Absolute Definitive List of the Top Ten Best Selling Genres

Popularity of Historical Novel by CenturyApparently, it is impossible to find one absolute definitive list of the top ten best selling genres anywhere–but can you find a list with 150? Yes, if you know where to look!

There are SOOO many variables out there from website to website. What is the focus? Is it hardback fiction, hardback non-fiction, paperback, or ebook? Are you asking the New York Times, USA Today, or Amazon? I recently wrote an article regarding Historical Fiction, and alluded to that genre’s sub-genres. This week I went looking for where the Historical Fiction genre related to all the others. See below for the breakdown. Continue reading “The Absolute Definitive List of the Top Ten Best Selling Genres”

Budweiser is Still King of Horse-Dog Commercials

 

Dog and Horse
Ellen DeGeneres tweeted, “They’re so cute and they nose it.”

I was struck by the recent post on Twitter by Ellen DeGeneres of the charming little picture of a dog and horse friendship and the obvious appreciation by Ellen as she noted, “They’re so cute and they nose it.”

 

Not the first picture of an unlikely pairing of animals far out of their own species, but as amazing and fun as the friendships between canines and felines or mammals and avians.

Sitting Horse and Dog
Sitting companions courtesy of pawmygosh.com

I suppose the bond between horse and dog isn’t so unnatural as the two have a history of working together under domestic situations for their humans the world over.

 

It’s Friday and we love cuteness overload. There are possibly few videos of a horse and dog relationship better than those Budweiser has put out over the years. What is your favorite?

©2017 Virginia Williams

 

10 Amazing Sub-Genre’s in Historical Fiction

10 amazing thingsHistorical Fiction as a literary genre is generously broad and notoriously ambiguous in that the beginning of man can be included in the same spectrum of writing as our own recent Wild West. It was bound to happen then that sooner or later sub-genres would be broken out.

What is Historical?

In that it depicts and closely associates the period’s social conditions, manners, clothing, and environmental factors, the story can capture any century or millennia from the dawn of man. Generally, “historical” refers to publications written at least 50 years after the event. Considering an extended time frame, therefore, an author would usually be assumed to be writing from research rather than from experience. (In the relatively unusual case of my grandfather’s manuscripts, however, they were written some time shortly after his “sailing, mining, prospecting, and cowpoke days,” over 90 years ago but only recently published by myself.)

So if it’s all historical fiction, what are the ten sub-genres? Continue reading “10 Amazing Sub-Genre’s in Historical Fiction”
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